pax pages with dialouge

[Grendel]

http://www.ozf5.com/pax_sample/pax_sample.html

[Grendel]

http://www.ozf5.com/pax_sample/paxlogo.jpg

http://www.ozf5.com/pax_sample/Pax72_1.jpg

http://www.ozf5.com/pax_sample/Pax72_2.jpg

http://www.ozf5.com/pax_sample/Pax72_3.jpg

http://www.ozf5.com/pax_sample/Pax72_4.jpg

http://www.ozf5.com/pax_sample/Pax72_5.jpg

[spork891]

Relatively easy to follow most of the time, although it gets a little muddy in the panels surrounding "and that they should kill one another"

Sets a great mood.

[Grendel]

thanks

[JFS]

I couldn't get a mood from this. It certainly is supposed to set a mood, but it doesn't for me. I suppose it's too dirty (i'm quite aware that it's supposed to be dirty, but i think some line has been tread over..) just my 2 cents.

[pvrhye]

My only crit is that the orange is quite mentally axhausting. I would like to get some cool colors here and there.

[Jess]

Love the overall mood of this. Great textures!

[Grendel]

thanks guys for looking it does get muddy in there and the fact that these version fo the pages are small doesnt help...