Hybrid Mech Final

[Legato]

inking sucks butt, but imo i did pretty good... i gotta learn to stop drawing the same thing over the pencil but to instead follow it line by line... i also got to get more patience... anyway, im not really liking the guns on the arms, but the rest is solid imo.

C&C most appreciated

http://incolor.inetnebr.com/legato/Art%20Scans/Hybrid%20Mech%20Final.jpg

[shadow]

sweet, i love the detail, althouhg the eye gets lost in it, its hard to see some pieces, and main anatomy.

[Legato]

actually... it doesn't have a eye :P

[Seraph]

I like it, but as shadow pointed out, the (your) eye gets lost in it. I think you need to be a little more gracious with the inking.

[Legato]

ahhh! what eye?! anyway, yeah all that inking was done with a "01" pen (i don't know what 01 means... anyway, its really really small... :P

[JFS]

The eye that looks on the drawing you've made.
Eyes. Our Eyes. My eyes. :)

Meaning theres not really a place of focus.. where the eye can relax and maybe travell of that point and outwards to discover the great detail you've put into the drawing.
Coloring will probably solve this..

[Forge]

to confusing to me... my eye is getting crazy ;)

[Legato]

OOOOOOOOOHHHHHHH... man im retarded

[shadow]

:chug: Its all good legato, i think what would really help you in your mech pictures is a set of tria or prismacolor markers. Get a 30% grey prismacolor to start, and just add in the shadows, I find that this helps me, and most mech designers get a sense of size and depth, good luck:)

[Zifnab]

:jawdrop:




is there a colored version of it.
regards;

[DanielandTheLionsPen]

looks great...

a little shading or coloring would make it an excellent mech drawing.

maybe a moutain desert background with shadows... haha just throwing ideas around.

goodwork

[Legato]

thank allot! im one step ahead of you! i got a new set of prisma markers 10%-black (cool series) and a bunch of new pens... also, it has been colored by sammy in the coloring book thread, and it looks kick ass!