advice please

[freethetoys]

http://hometown.aol.co.uk/criminaldamage00/images/art%20compo.jpg

my pic didnt work last night when i loaded it up, what can i be inproing on, somthing does not feel real about my drawings

[die_with_honor]

The face might be the problem every thing else looks pretty good exept for the hands they suck work on them

[5-0]

looks good. the hands do loo way to sloppy though. the feet are a bit wierd as well. apart from that its pretty good, just start building up the details and youll have some very good work.

[AnarchyAo2]

hey, nice concept. I think the hands need the most work. The face would be a lot better if you added in more shading. The feet look strange but its not as noticable as the hands.

[Form]

stick with plain pencil till you know wat your on about.

Do anatomy studies in HB lead, and work on anatomy anatomy anatomy.

[AnarchyAo2]

I disagree focus. I think that perminate media like watercolors, markers, pens, etc are good for beginners. It eliminates the want to correct yourself. Its good to make mistakes, that way you learn from them and avoid them all together. But, with pencils, you get many chances to get a line right, and isn't it better to avoid mistakes all together? don't get me wrong, pencils are great but I think perminate media is good for beginners because it reinforces good habits.

[Form]

jes i agree. For some reason when i wrote my comments i was in the midframe of making it look better when i should have been thinking of how best to learn instead.

Peace - ty anarchy