Critique pls help!!

[diva_angel]

hey guyyzzzz!!!!
m new to this forum... i ve jus started wit sketching. i wd like anybody to crit on it! i know tat m no match for u guys.. but i still wanna learn n correct my mistakes...
so any help from u ll be appreciated ... thanku....heres my sketchbook 4 u!!!:drinkup::yayca:

[diva_angel]

guyzz!!! other sketches.. need ur feedback.. ll be of great help. thankyou:lifedrawing:752156

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[diva_angel]

someone.. pl help me out.... ur crit ll be valuable in my further sketchng ventures.. stared out jus nw. so too early to analyze my own work:drinkup:

[Marlisa]

Hey, welcome at CA :).

A few crits: were are you from? Is English the language of your country? Because your posts are really hard to read with al those abbreviations ('ur crit ll be valuable in my further sketchng ventures... stared out jus nw' is harder for me to read than your crits will be valuable in my further sketching adventures... started out just now), especially for people who don't speak English at their home country, like me).

Then another thing; don't expect always a reply on your updates. I've had weeks when I posted almost every day and didn't got any reply's at all. Just be patient :).

About your works: it's a really good start! the Bridgman's look good, keep on working at that. Also you do different studies, like still life and portraits.
In this stage I can only say that you should continue like that and watch a looooot of sketchbooks around here. They will inspire you and maybe you see things that will help you with proportions or shading and stuff.

Keep up the good work! ;)


Edit: one more thing: post a link to your sketchbook in your signature. That will attract more people to your sketchbook.

[diva_angel]

hello there,
yeah got what you said. ill make sure that everyone understands what i post here. and i am from india. and currently pursuing my architecture.
and thanks a lot for having a peek at my work.
and i few a few doubts.. do you think i will ever be able to make it like you someday???
i know this sounds silly .. and as though i lack confidence in myself.. but its just that i wanna know whats your perspective about it...
can i ???:yayca:

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[diva_angel]

okay ppl!!
here are some of my watercolor works n color pencil too...feel free to comment on it.. thankyou...:D

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[diva_angel]

This is a kiosk design done by me in my first year of college...it s pen n ink with watercolor wash...the concept of my design was the interplay of light,color and space...:D
following it up are few watercolor tries....:D
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