tank of the future

[morie]

this came to mind it looks lik and tank but together with a plane its just a little sketch

[Corean]

Hey there, I like the idea of this futuristic tank. It sort of looks like a limo in the front -- maybe a luxurious killing machine? ;) Either way, design looks good but the perspective on the treading I'm not sure. Is it supposed to come out looking like wings tilting upward? Otherwise, the bottoms should be lined up to a vanishing point.

I also noticed you have several different posts up in this section. I would suggest maybe putting all your sketches in a single book to make it easier to critique.

For the "new fresh ideas" post I think you should take it easy on your line weights. Find places you want to particularly emphasize and make those more bold. At the moment, there are too many thick lines (which is good for stylization) and no real emphasis, which makes it look rather awkward. Lines further away should probably be a bit thinner too in order to show perspective, I think. Don't hold me too much on that one though.

Line weights could also be helpful on posts like your "new idea" with the marker colouring. It gives some dimension to the design. I think you could really benefit with some perspective studies also, or maybe a look at one of the Industrial Design mentoring threads to review the exercises. You can find Vogel's thread here (http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=158936) and Yoitisi's here (http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=116199).

Keep posting, but yeah maybe put them all in one book. :) Happy drawing!