Eating House

[Nadim]

I sketched this in July '01 - Im thinking of a '04 version.
Any crits - Comments .. hints :D

http://img5.photobucket.com/albums/v15/kiking/2004/PLane_sketch.jpg

[Bee]

Wow old sketch.. you must really like it :) Stuff with really planned perspective like that always looks great in my opinion.
It would be nice to see it painted, or a copy where the lines are cleaner so you can see more of the details.
Look forward to the update!

[Mr. Teatime]

cool.. you can hardly tell its on ruled paper. I like it, you should do that update. yeah. cool.

[Scaramouche]

really nice,your free hand is good:blue: :blue:

[JProvost]

Ouch, lots of perspective distortion. The nearest corners are way too tight. When things come to a right angle they'll never be seen as less than 90 degrees - in fact, they only approach that in 3-point perspective, or a 1-point perspective looking straight down at it.

As a general rule, the tightest that front corner should ever be is around 120 degrees. This provides a rather natural view of the scene or object. Any less and it starts appearing as you're looking down a little which suggests a 3-point perspective.

[Nadim]

You can't depend on your eyes when your imagination is out of focus.

[frantic]

looks very architectural too me, and because I study interior design -which is called here interior architecture- I hatee architecture :))

but no offense..this one looks still good to me..good job:)