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JeffZNY
August 7th, 2009, 06:38 PM
It's time for a new sketchbook, it really is. How do you know? When you look at the artwork at the outset and find it embarrassing, it's time for a reboot. Out with the old and in with the new, as they say.

Now, I'd rather I could run and hide from my old stuff altogether, but for the super curious, you can find my old sketchbook here (http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=50267).

And if we're really gonna dredge up old dirt, try this blast from the past (http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=30726) on for size. *Shudders*

Phew, glad that's done with. Quick and easy - like a band-aid. Now for the fun stuff.

Here are my two most recent finished illustrations. I'm gonna show them first since I'm most happy with them.
http://www.jeffzachowski.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/gaia-700-536x1024.jpg http://www.jeffzachowski.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/Spirit_paint1.jpg

These aren't very recent, but I'm pretty happy with them as well.
http://www.jeffzachowski.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/forest21.jpghttp://www.jeffzachowski.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/vulture4-1024x592.jpg

Here are a few portraits for good measure. They portray, in order, my wife, Neil Gaiman, Susanna Clarke, and David Wright. I later got both the Gaiman and Wright pictures autographed by their respective subjects, which was, in a word, neat.
http://www.jeffzachowski.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/jessie2.jpghttp://www.jeffzachowski.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/gaiman_clarke.jpghttp://www.jeffzachowski.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/dwright_portrait.jpg

For my next act, I shall post some sketches. Thanks guys!

JeffZNY
August 7th, 2009, 06:55 PM
What's that? You want some sketches in this sketchbook? Alright, alright...

How about this oldie for a warmup? This sketch is about 3-4 years old, but I only just rediscovered it. If I remember correctly, it was inspired by a magazine cover of Rachel Weisz, though damned if I can find it now. I remember, in the absence of any art supplies (I was staying with my mother at the time), it seemed a fine idea to raid the fridge and see what I could achieve with ketchup and mustard. I believe white-out was employed for the highlights and I upped the saturation in Photoshop afterwards. The whole thing made for a funky, if not perfectly symmetrical afternoon.
http://www.jeffzachowski.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/sketch3106small.jpg

As you can see in the below sketch, I often like to draw my compositions, and sometimes even my characters, in bits and pieces which I later assemble in PS.
http://www.jeffzachowski.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/vulture-sketch.jpg

I frequently don't have the patience to correct my flawed sketches, though the task seems a bit less daunting since I re-purchased a light box (threw my old one out at some point for some no-doubt-asinine reason). I'm breaking the habit a bit, but veeeery slowly. But I hate erasers, I really do.

Anyway, here's a good example of what I'll often do with a flawed sketch. Below, a sketch that shows some promise but ultimately looks very little like my wife:
http://www.jeffzachowski.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/jessie1.jpg

A few tweaks in PS and voila, now it's a dead ringer.
http://www.jeffzachowski.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/jessie.jpg

Finally, there's this, which is a bit of a more refined sketch than the others I've posted here. You'll recognize this guy from one of the finished illustrations at the top of thread.
http://www.jeffzachowski.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/atticus.jpg

Thanks again guys! And until next time - Keep watching the skies!

Hungry_Wombat
August 7th, 2009, 06:57 PM
I love your style. These are all excellent, but I have a particular affinity toward the first one.

JeffZNY
August 7th, 2009, 08:08 PM
Congrats, HW! You're the first comment in the new book. Wish I had a gnarly prize to fork over, but you'll have to settle for more art from me, sorry. And thanks very much for the kind words:-)

Now onto the business end of this thing. I did an interesting thing yesterday: I painted blind. You see, my eyes are frequently problematic pains in the arse. My contacts often leave my eyes dry and irritated but I hate the vision I get with glasses, so I'm often left straining to see, in terrible pain. Yesterday I decided to give my poor peepers a break, and instead of putting my glasses on, I spent about an hour trying to navigate life through the blurry eyes of a hopelessly near-sighted klutz. Then it occurred to me - A ha! This smells like a great experiment. I took out the ol' sketchbook and sketched some faces and gestures. I couldn't really see what the heck I was drawing, but that's okay - in a lot of instances I think I attained greater accuracy than I would have with the benefit of clear vision. The exercise allowed me to relax a bit and just draw without worrying about what I was doing and how it looked. It also forced me to pay less attention to line and detail and more attention to gesture and movement, since that's about all I could see when squinting at the paper. Anyway, I plan on repeating the process in the future, both to rest my eyes and give my artist's brain a fresh perspective.

In the meanwhile, my blind session yielded at least one fruitful sketch. This below gesture of a figure seemingly caught between leaping and flying.
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It was enough to get the gears turning...
I'll be back with more later tonight.

JeffZNY
August 7th, 2009, 10:53 PM
And I'm back. No different than I was an hour ago but perhaps better fed.

Continuing where I left off... The above gesture drawing intrigued me. Better still, it gave me an idea. I'm working on a story involving a white-haired girl named Quinn with a certain talent for transformation (she's in a couple of the finished pieces at the top). Instantly I was reminded of a particular scene from my story and I got to work.

From the initial gesture, I developed this thumbnail sketch (though at this point I've put my contact lenses back in). If possible it's even more a jumble than the sketch I'd done half-blind. Ignore the odd-looking hand in the lower left corner. Ignore the black orb above her head, too - I'm still trying to figure out what I want to do with the moon.
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Next I start sketching the actors. The raven is easiest. I take a couple cracks at it and I'm fairly happy that I'm on the right track.
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Quinn proves more difficult, of course. I get the limbs down okay, then I get a bit carried away with the hair...
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I think I've still got this one (http://www.jeffzachowski.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/gaia-700.jpg) on the brain. Nude girl covered by long rapunzel-locks does not work as well in this instance. Not to mention it's probably beyond my skill level to execute it deftly enough with an adolescent character.

I decided I needed to think about Quinn's pose some more so I turned to some reference. Photos of hurdlers and such. I was reminded of a painting by Jon Foster so I got out my copy of "r/evolution." The one I was thinking about was this cover for Magehound (http://www.o-love.net/realms/covers_large/pic_cou1.jpg), but needless to say I lost myself paging through the book for about an hour. At the end of the hour, I decided to do a couple of studies from Jon's cover for Orvis (http://www.conceptart.org/artist/jon-foster/2.html).
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That's all for now. I haven't taken a piece step-by-step through CA in a looong while, so this should be fun. I'm hoping it's beneficial to someone, but just as importantly I'm hoping it will encourage me to crank this one through to final in short order.

Jesus Food
August 8th, 2009, 12:07 AM
u have a very loose flowing line jeff, especially in the hair. dont ever stop drawing... ur wife lol seriously great 1st pg dude

JeffZNY
August 8th, 2009, 10:10 AM
Thanks JF!

I'm still sketching for the above WIP. This one's closer to what I believe I'll eventually take to final. Next up I'll probably shoot some reference for the fabric.
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JeffZNY
August 8th, 2009, 12:32 PM
I lied - no reference shots yet. For now, I'll be running with the sketch below. It's my favorite thus far. As much as I try to remind myself not to get too big too quickly, I find that large sheets of paper yield large yucky sketches. At least, that's how it works for me. Even though it seems counter-intuitive, I really need to make a habit of putting aside my large top-quality sketchbook and using my 50 cent garage sale 4"x6" book instead. Four-by-six is plenty big for any sort of pencil sketch.

JeffZNY
August 10th, 2009, 12:42 PM
Alright, guys, I think I need some help for this stage. I'm still undecided on what I want to do with the moon in this one. Don't want it to be too cliche and E.T.-like, but then again, E.T. is such a good movie... So I've got two compositions I'm deciding between and I'd very much appreciate your input.

Comp1
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Comp2
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JeffZNY
August 10th, 2009, 02:17 PM
Maybe no moon at all?
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Or...
Comp4
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JeffZNY
August 13th, 2009, 12:51 AM
I've gotten some great tips in the Critique Center (http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?p=2387312#post2387312). This is coming along nicely. I've pretty much settled on a composition and I'm laying in some rudimentary color and value now.
http://www.conceptart.org/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=750894&stc=1&d=1250138686

Eon
August 17th, 2009, 10:28 PM
It's interesting seeing your creation process for your illustrations. You're pushing your style to evolve into something very personal. This trees in this one (http://www.jeffzachowski.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/forest21.jpg) have a copy/pasted feel to them next to the solid shapes behind and it create a great sense of "flat depth" if that makes sense. Really digging it. However I don't think the same technique works all that well in the painterly elephant piece where the elements all pop out to the viewer as being separate and the piece doesn't feel like a unified work whereas the other illustrations do. Anyway, keep up the great work!

JeffZNY
August 20th, 2009, 02:39 PM
Eon - thanks a lot, I appreciate it. That "flat depth" you're talking about is exactly what I was shooting for. I'm a huge Arthur Rackham fan (who isn't?) and for that particular piece, I was aiming for a Rackham fairytale-type feel. If you check back in here, could you elaborate a bit on your comments concerning the elephant piece? Which elements do you feel don't work? I polished that one up from an oooooold concept and I'm hoping to make it a portfolio piece, so I appreciate any advice on how it could be improved. Thanks!!

JeffZNY
August 20th, 2009, 07:59 PM
I've been real bad on this one - hadn't touched it in about a week. but here's an update. i'm hoping to kick it into gear and finish this one up over the next few days.

Demon Lizardman
August 20th, 2009, 08:01 PM
I like the poses you put your characters in, this style is really nice and I like it a lot I must say.

JeffZNY
August 20th, 2009, 11:00 PM
Thanks Lizardman.

Update.

JeffZNY
August 21st, 2009, 12:10 PM
I think I'm going to wrap this up today - so you guys should expect some more updates throughout the day. For now, here's a detail as I continue to render the composition's focal point. In truth, it's an appealing stand-alone image in its own right...

Tobuoi
August 21st, 2009, 12:23 PM
Lol, your style LOOKS like Neil Gaiman. Anyway, really nice stuff, so far. Very distinct and aesthetically interesting. I really do like your style, but it'd be nice to a bit more realistic stuff thrown in the mix, here and there. You know, gesture drawings, figure studies, etc. That's really the only advice I have for you at the moment. Can't wait for more.

Izer
August 21st, 2009, 12:39 PM
Pretty cool style, the baseball player looks really good as well, shows different side to your work.

JeffZNY
August 21st, 2009, 01:44 PM
Izer - Thanks!
Tubuoi - I draw mainly from reference and imagination with probably a too infrequent pinch of life drawing. I don't have many gestures and studies to post, but I've attached a few pages from my sketchbook and there are some studies and such buried in there:-)

JeffZNY
August 21st, 2009, 04:43 PM
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Tobuoi
August 21st, 2009, 05:12 PM
You do a good style incorporating just a dash of your style in your observational stuff. I'm still kind of knew to drawing digitally, but it does seem like sketching lends itself better to actual pen(cil) and paper. Anyway...nice. : D

Rolo
August 21st, 2009, 06:12 PM
Wow! I very very very much like your style! Very distinctive! I love the way you do the hair and faces.

Very good stuff here! I love the way you do your trees and the way you do the gestures! Infact I love practically everything here! I'm gonna be waiting for more stuff!

JeffZNY
August 21st, 2009, 11:06 PM
Thanks so much Rolo.

Another update.
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JeffZNY
August 22nd, 2009, 05:19 PM
I think this is finished.
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JeffZNY
August 22nd, 2009, 11:28 PM
I'm continuing to revisit some old art - this one for Fantasy Flight Games, 2005 or 2006. I've spruced it up for the ol' portfolio.

p sage
August 23rd, 2009, 02:13 AM
The one of the girl in front of the moon is nice, but I like the feel in this one (http://www.jeffzachowski.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/Spirit_paint1.jpg) quite a bit. It just has sort of an old world, Victorian-era mythology book feel to it or something.

I do find the head of the devil-guy with the coffee mug a bit wonky, and (sorry to say) I think there's a similar problem in the portrait of your wife... the head shape seems off in both cases.

But the stylistic elements you employ are top notch.

I'll be watching this thread. Thanks!

JeffZNY
August 23rd, 2009, 12:42 PM
Thanks sage - don't worry, i won't tell my wife what you said about her head:-P

p sage
August 23rd, 2009, 03:15 PM
Thanks sage - don't worry, i won't tell my wife what you said about her head:-P

:bashful: :teeth:

JeffZNY
August 24th, 2009, 01:48 PM
Another paint-over in an attempt to make some older work meet my portfolio standards.
This one was also completed for FFG in or around 2005.

JeffZNY
August 26th, 2009, 09:08 PM
5min sketch of my dog this afternoon...

JeffZNY
September 2nd, 2009, 03:18 PM
I really thought this was done... but I was wrong. While I really loved the rendering in the original version, stepping back for a few days I realized that I lost the "story" somewhere along the way. Hey, it happens. Here's the new version, which I think does a much better job of conveying the protagonist's metamorphosis. Thanks for looking!

RedSquirrel
September 2nd, 2009, 04:58 PM
Holy crumbs what wonderful work! I think I prefer the other version of that last one though. So very inspirational, please post lots more!
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RedSquirrel
September 2nd, 2009, 04:59 PM
Double post >_> sorry

JeffZNY
January 2nd, 2010, 12:22 PM
Bit late in posting this - Best wishes for a healthy and happy New Year. Here's hoping 2010 beats the heck out of 2009. Not holding my breath though...

Sketched in pencil, painted in watercolor, finished and tweaked in Painter and Photoshop.
http://www.jeffzachowski.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/polaris.jpg

And a detail...
http://www.jeffzachowski.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/SANTA-detail.jpg

JeffZNY
December 12th, 2010, 01:34 PM
Man, I haven't posted since last Christmas. Sad.
http://www.jeffzachowski.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/YETI-XMAS-795x1024.jpg

kiwigarbage
December 12th, 2010, 01:36 PM
Is that a sentimental Yeti? I HEART HIM. His nose and hand positions make me smile :)