Cartoon Style - new ink comic added

[Asmodeus]

I wanted funny facial expressions and a simple cartoon look for this one, so I used clean ink lines by rotring and put some flat colors by Photoshop. Although Max´s face is not realistic modelled -eyes looks to right but mouth turns to left- I like it that way.

Teeeeeeeell me whut you think...

http://www.dragonink.web1000.com/Dibujos/Dragon_Ink_Dibujos/dibujos_Javier/Max_tinta.jpg

http://www.dragonink.web1000.com/Dibujos/Dragon_Ink_Dibujos/dibujos_Javier/Max_color.jpg

[threelegged_chicken]

i really like this.. i personally like the b/w one but for some strange reason im just drawn to b/w line art.

3-leg

[5-0]

amazing stuff as usual. I prefer the colour to be quite honest. you would be damn good at making these modern day cartoons because your style in this image matches what i am seeing on T.V. As usual another good female put in as well.

-excellent work

:chug:

[Asmodeus]

Thanks for your comments, there are some other of my ink works.

http://www.dragonink.web1000.com/Dibujos/Dragon_Ink_Dibujos/dibujos_Javier/death2.jpg

The text says: "Didn´t dinosaurs extinct before human race appears?" - that very bad joke was my excuse to draw a Tyrannosaurus. I was very happy with that comic strip when I drew it but now I see lot of things I could improve - Maybe I´ll redraw it, put the dinosaur in a more dinamic pose and work more on the background.
http://www.dragonink.web1000.com/Dibujos/Dragon_Ink_Dibujos/dibujos_Javier/Gervasio_tira.jpg

http://www.dragonink.web1000.com/Dibujos/Dragon_Ink_Dibujos/dibujos_Javier/caretostinta.jpg

[5-0]

like your first one with the death dude, that scene reminds me of some thing of a comic called Judge vs Dredge. Surely a pistol that has radioactive properties is way to dangerous fo that close range attack.

[Bee]

The expressions are fantastic :)

[Asmodeus]

I have some Judge Dredd comics but ... I don´t see in my pic any similarity with them :D.
Thanks, bee, facial expressions are one of my favourite things to draw. Take a look at these.

http://www.dragonink.web1000.com/Dibujos/Dragon_Ink_Dibujos/dibujos_Javier/caricaturatinta02.jpg

http://www.dragonink.web1000.com/Dibujos/Dragon_Ink_Dibujos/dibujos_Javier/dragonchino.jpg

[SEVANS]

Hard to critique such a 'cartoony" (hate that word) style.
Your characters have fantistic expressions and your crisp, clean linework is great.

Have to agree with threelegged_chicken about the B&W versus the colour one. I like both, but perhaps the use of gradients has made the image feel to perfect.

Or perhaps a 2nd shade (or highlight) on the main character "max" would bring me forward and create a better centre of focus, I keep looking at the redhead first.