Another 2

[Senpen]

Here are another two that I have redone.

[Kristal Lee]

I particularly like how you used detail perspective in the first one, with so much focus on her face and then having the details fade a bit further out. :)

[WyckdNick]

Ah very nice! You smoothed that arm very well. It really makes the piece work/feel a lot better.

Good stuff!

[nevermindjoker]

the hand in the 2nd image looks big to me in relation to her head, if it's align to her. the drapery near the hand in relation to the drapery near the body, it seems awkward, i really don't know, if the hand is near the viewer i guess the drapery should'nt be like that but i guess it's just me...i love the first image!

[thegrayslayer]

Lovely, really nice feel to both. Really like the colours used.

~Slayer

[Senpen]

Thankyou for the feedback everyone. I appreciate it.