xmen dark era page 2

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jus finished this up

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Just a few quick comments.

Nice strong inking style, but the hatching on the jacket is a let down. The cross hatching has actually flattened the clothing, I suggest just using single taped strokes that flow with the curves of the jacket - this would create much more volume.

In the fourth panel, there appears to be something growing out of the characters head. perhaps just a white touch-up would solve this problem.

And the last comment (which you can ignore), I personally find that the nose on the main character points upward too much and makes him look very ferret like. Perfect if he's a weaselly person though.

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thanks,i''ll try my best to fix it

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