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elddonnemar
July 24th, 2009, 12:33 AM
Eh... hello. Welcome to my sketch book. =)

Critiques are much appreciated.

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I should've been sleeping, but I drew this instead, then I passed out before I could post it. I really like it and will probably post this in the WIP forum as I color it.
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Doodling after reading Ron Lemen's head tutorial (http://www.anticz.com/heads.htm). I'm still struggling with the basics, yes.
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Trying to understand the female figure. Referenced figures here (http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/hitoFiles/zenshin1.html).
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DKHutcheson
July 24th, 2009, 12:48 AM
These are looking great so far. That figure is quite nice. It's great you've started drawing so many different kind of faces.

I'm particularly liking the bandanna girl. It's a neat design.
Strassenpenner08
July 24th, 2009, 03:47 AM
Welcome :P

Nice studies ... i really like those faces ^^
elddonnemar
July 24th, 2009, 05:46 PM
@Daphne: Thank you very much! I like that particular sketch as well. Maybe I should develop the design further?

@Strassenpenner08: Thank you! =) I wish I was as good as you were when I was 15...
BlackDelphin
July 26th, 2009, 08:32 AM
ooh i totally have problem with leg angles like that one (from the last post) totally love that female figure!! :D love those knees in particular!

and i think those heads are great~
even if you're struggling, you get it done, no
elddonnemar
August 10th, 2009, 10:24 PM
Preliminary character designs for DAcademy assignment. Going to keep working on it on and off despite it being late. They're Dungeons and Dragons characters. Haha...ha...

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Update to Fey character sketch.

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elddonnemar
August 11th, 2009, 10:37 PM
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JJacks
August 11th, 2009, 10:58 PM
Beautiful pencil sketches. I really like the first one best. I hope you can retain that nice fluid motion as you continue to CG paint it.
elddonnemar
August 11th, 2009, 11:14 PM
@ JJacks: Thank you. =) May I ask if you think the current version has retained the fluidity?
Tofa
August 11th, 2009, 11:20 PM
nice start man, liking the head shots and the elven like portrait. post more! :)
sansan
August 11th, 2009, 11:38 PM
like your pencil sketches!.:)
elddonnemar
August 18th, 2009, 01:47 AM
About 30 hrs of work so far. Ugh, I suck.

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Irishdrunk
August 18th, 2009, 02:07 AM
Whoa! 30 hours of work? That's some deep dedication.

I would just suggest to plan ahead more. Ya know, use big shapes and whittle down to the details. Keep practicing, the rest of your SB looks great.
elddonnemar
August 18th, 2009, 02:29 AM
@Cristina: ...how did I miss your comment? I worry about myself sometimes... Anyway, thanks! And yeah, I will definitely trudge on despite the difficulties. Speaking of which, I need to get some anatomy studies done already. >_<

@chriis.zed: Thanks! I will. Hopefully at on a more regular basis.

@sansan: Alright! I'll post more pencil sketches, then!

@Irishdrunk: Thanks... ^^' And I did try to start with planning, but as I refined, things changed a lot... if you're interested I'll post some in progress shots.
elddonnemar
August 18th, 2009, 06:02 AM
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Irishdrunk
August 18th, 2009, 08:09 AM
@Irishdrunk: Thanks... ^^' And I did try to start with planning, but as I refined, things changed a lot... if you're interested I'll post some in progress shots.

Oh man, I love seeing people's progress. Please do.

And that last pic was very nice. The blue contrasts well against the brown. And I like the hood design ^^
BlackDelphin
December 3rd, 2009, 02:14 PM
You are not updating any more :(

Where are you!!!?!!!