Girl in Turtlneck

[yeticatcher]

Here's my first year '04 rendering. Just staying in practice with 2B graphite on bond paper.

Happy New Year.

-yeti

http://www.trubalcava.com/sketchbook/Turtle_Neck_render.jpg

[5-0]

your rendering is superb. The face needs abit of work. Damn awesome stuff.

cant really see problems, the face does a look a little wierd maybe her chin is to sharp? im just not sure

[Storyline]

I love this. The only thing I'd change is the way you outlined her dress. It looks like you cut it out and pasted it on.

[Rayl]

I love it nothing bad to say from me..I really need to go and work on my pencilling now..Nice job:chug:

[Asmodeus]

I like it. I think you should have worked a little more on that hand. Although it´s a personal question, I recommend you to try a cleaner ink line.

[yeticatcher]

Well thanks for all the nice comments and crits. Very helpful!

Asmodeus: I'm not sure, but I don't think 2B graphite comes with ink. Maybe you didn't realize that it is a sketch. ;)

Again thanks for your input! :)

-Tom

[Asmodeus]

Oh man, ha ha - excuse me. Anyway I think a pic like this could rock with a clean ink borderline, and shadows by pencil.

[yeticatcher]

Ah, yes! I see what you mean. It could look vey cool. Thanks!