Cyberpunk - Female Nude

[Asmodeus]

I started drawing a female nude, then I added the wing - I didn´t want to draw another wing so I put the cables to compensate composition. I´m not convinced about her right breast.

Let me know what you think! I want comments and critics :)

http://www.dragonink.web1000.com/Dibujos/Dragon_Ink_Dibujos/dibujos_Javier/G3.jpg

[child of sin]

so great ^_^ i like it allot!
also i like the concept and lines. keep it up!

[DeadPepper]

I, too, like this a lot. Its a great style and a great concept.
As for the breast thing, i agree that the right breast doesn't match the left, perhaps either widen her left breast or reduce the right in size.
And i'd love to see it in color :D

Good work :chug:

[5-0]

awesome dude, your work is really inspiring in my opinion. i like it all. Yeah the breast is the only problem i can think of. You are really good at drawing females.

keep up the good work, would also love to see this one finished!

[Snowball]

Hello, I have to say your lines are very well layed out, and your anatomy is looking good, only thing I noticed first was her right hand fingers look a little too long, just a small crit, take it or leave it. Other than that looking good and would love to see some color splashed on her!

[die_with_honor]

Yes the right breast is off fix this small tragity or we will all die
ahhhhhhh the humanity
my god save us all
..................
Nice work. Asmodeus I just felt like repplying like that but I would agree its awsom. Thanks for sharing with this site.
:D

[Asmodeus]

Thanks a lot for your comments, I´m glad you like it. This one was very satisfactory for me because she was my first nice lady (I wasn´t very good at drawing females). I see what you say about the fingers, and now I see there are some other problems with proportions.

I would like to see a color version too, but I´m not planning to do that thing. Anyone interested on color my pic?

There is another girl, very remiscent of Adam Hughe´s style. Someone said to me that her lips are a little big, and maybe it´s true, but I like that kind of lips -yum. Tell me what you think about her - and also about the old man.

http://www.dragonink.web1000.com/Dibujos/Dragon_Ink_Dibujos/dibujos_Javier/lapizazul001.jpg

[5-0]

that was me who placed that comment. I think both of them are very good looking. I would say the lips are a little big but they should be fine. Finish either of them, they are both excellent. If you finished one of them could I buy a copy with your signature?

:D

[die_with_honor]

I wish I had sideburns like that

[jla]

hey snowball,
i really like your drawing! yah i do have to agree that you can fix the finger as well,it's to long and you should had a smaller crit, and the breast as well ill make the right wider!

For the drawing of the frist lady and the man well i love that drawing and i wouldnt think on changing a thing!


:chug:

bye

[malicious]

love your style asmodeus. no need to comment on the anatomical issue you raised, it's not *that* big a deal. keep up the good work.