ermine's sketchbook

[ermine]

I'm new to posting in CA. Art has always been something I've done for my own enjoyment but as I get older I find I want to improve and hopefully become more productive. I am painfully slow and often return to pieces much later for tweaking.

I've never been completely satisfied with this one. I would like to finish it and send it on it's merry way.

[meticulous]

Nice Start to the SB! *(I can't help it - I'm a sucker for pinups :) ) She looks great man! Only suggestion I would make that might help give you a finished feeling - sharpen up her shoe outlines and the stockings band maybe? Just a suggestion. Dig her skin tones too! Keep em coming man!

[ermine]

Thanks Meticulous. I like the suggestions.

Here are a couple others, one old and two more recent.

[MoKhi]

That first image in the second post is perfect. I can't find anything to critique it about.
There are a few things about the first image. The hand is a bit flat and has too many lines on it. It doesn't match the back or the shoes which are so blended. If you shaded them more and with more contrast it would match the rest of the image better.
I love your work and your style. I hope to see more soon.

[jackpot_anjr90]

Nice work! I really love this latest post :D For the one in your first post, I'd say render the hand a bit more...it looks like there are too many lines and definitely more lines than the rest of the picture. Keep it up :)

[ermine]

another from a year or two back.