Martian sand pirate.

[Wolverine]

Ive been working on this small scene for quite awhile now on and off. Its quite off the cliché martian design and I really want to get some antenae in, just cant find the good spot. The background is perhaps a little boring, any c n c there would help. And now, should he have a body? eek dont answer that :bash: :)

http://realmdesigner.250free.com/stag56.jpg

heres the original piece i started with, a speed paintinf of 15 minutes or so..
http://realmdesigner.250free.com/stag2.jpg

c & c welcome

[Wolverine]

hmm ok...
well the body so far, what are your thoughts?
http://realmdesigner.250free.com/12stagur.jpg

[Mad Giraffe]

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[Wolverine]

well it works now......:o

[SEVANS]

Yet that is difinitely not a cliche design, however the character looks almost human and because of that your proportions are looking way off.

I would suggest either more realistic human proportions or a more alien, not of this world design. The martian just looks like a pirate at this time.

Use the image as a starting point and redraw and altar (just in sketches) several times until you find a concept that kicks arse.