blue pencil caricature

[Asmodeus]

http://www.dragonink.web1000.com/Dibujos/Dragon_Ink_Dibujos/dibujos_Javier/lapizazul005MMM.jpg

Caricature of a friend of mine.

I want comments. Not only "I like it" "I think that´s great". I also want "I´m not convinced about that thing" "Why don´t you try to...?" and that kind of constructive things. Thanks!

[EvilChristoph]

i like the simplification style you're using.
I also like the detail in the general face area, and especially the highlignt of the profile looks really cool. I find the ear interesting, but ill-placed

changes i would make:

- i would not have the character fade out toward the right, i would render the entire thing, or at least include a contour of the figure. This is especially true of hte pencil; it looks a little wierd. However, this is, of course, preference
- The face stands out too much, when it seems obvious the hand is your center of attention. I would either reduce detail in the face or increase detail in the hand.
-i would re-think the line separating hte head and the neck.

cheers!

[Asmodeus]

I know the ear could not be in the right place but i like it that way. I´m agree with you in the rest of things, specially about the hand, I should have worked more on it.

Thanks a lot for your comments!