car

[charger]

well i had nothing to do so i started to draw a car and this is what i have so fare i cut it out in ps 7

http://www.angelfire.com/ultra/pbf/car.jpg

so what do you think about it how can i make it better?

[charger]

come on i have seen more post on a chicken lens flare lol

[FFS]

i think you need to add more shading and detail to mainly the side of the car and the front and it looks like it needs more of a feeling of light if u get waht i mean but that just comes through the shading a spose

[Matt Elder]

Where is the chicken lens flare :D :p :D

You have an interesting design and it almost looks like a car to go and try to run over people (pointed nose and pointed wheel coverings). It is just a little weird to see a car from this angle. Like the previous comment, add in some shading and possibly do something with the background - the red just bugs me - it is so strong.

[charger]

is this any better?

http://www.angelfire.com/ultra/pbf/car2.jpg

[Matt Elder]

Looks so much better now without that over powering red. Maybe drop a shadow some how under neath the car. Maybe also use some darker tones as at the moment you only have a narrow tonal range.