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Anghardel
January 3rd, 2004, 12:59 PM
well, just as the title says, these are both works in progress. I had a bit of trouble loading the monochromatic batman pic onto the net, so I'm not sure how well that will turn out. Anyway, the first one is a little pic of a char that I'm working on. I'm sort of stuck on her, I can't figure out where to go haha, even though I know what needs to be done, like finishing and giving her a head. I think I'm going to go for long hair with this one, rather than the short I've done before.

the Batman picture is being done using a reference, comic book cover. He's eventually going to be fighting a predator, which is the owner of that lovely fist coming at him from below, heh. well tell me what you think C&C is what I need, always.;) I'm placing the batman pic as a link instead of a picture, since it's uber-massive for now lol.

http://www.angelfire.com/games5/carlock_art/Char_3.jpg

Batman, monochromatic! (http://www.angelfire.com/games5/carlock_art/BATMAN_MAN_.jpg)
Al Ian
January 3rd, 2004, 01:14 PM
(singing) "I have no head, I have no head, I have no head...."

Umm... its GIANT SIZED. Shrink it a bit so its easier to view. Cant find anything to crit other then their aint no HEAD!
Anghardel
January 3rd, 2004, 01:37 PM
haha, yeah I still have to add that, I'm deciding what sort of hair I want for the char. ehh, I need some feedback on the Batman pic on the link too. Lemme go back and see if I can't shrink this pic down a bit;)
Matt Elder
January 3rd, 2004, 03:24 PM
argh! Bandwidth consumption - can't see the image :(
Anghardel
January 3rd, 2004, 07:53 PM
arrggghhh, I hate it when that happens. Anyway, the pics are back up now, as you can see.
Matt Elder
January 4th, 2004, 12:07 AM
The pictures are hard to crit when they are that big as you can't get a look at the whole thing all at once.

Batman head - your rendering is coming along really well althought I don't really understand what is going on near the back of his head with the white area.

Headless Dude - obviously needs a head and maybe put in a shadow just to help ground the image a little bit. The hand could use a little detail but you are probably getting to that.
Anghardel
January 4th, 2004, 12:34 AM
back in the back near the head, where there looks like something is about to be added is the place where I am putting Batman's fist, shooting towards the soon to come predator. I want to ask something, since I've been curious about this, what exactly is "rendering" or what does it mean?:p :rolleyes: :D