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Hyptosis
January 2nd, 2004, 08:23 PM
Searching for the Stone Flower

http://www.lorestrome.com/images/spitfirelancer.jpg

Detail 1 (http://www.lorestrome.com/trash/spitfirelancerdetail1.jpg)
Detail 2 (http://www.lorestrome.com/trash/spitfirelancerdetail2.jpg)

Progress 1 (http://www.lorestrome.com/trash/spitfirelancer1.jpg)
Progress 2 (http://www.lorestrome.com/trash/spitfirelancer2.jpg)
Progress 3 (http://www.lorestrome.com/trash/spitfirelancer3.jpg)
Progress 4 (http://www.lorestrome.com/trash/spitfirelancer4.jpg)
Progress 5 (http://www.lorestrome.com/trash/spitfirelancer5.jpg)
Progress 6 (http://www.lorestrome.com/trash/spitfirelancer6.jpg)
minoukatze
January 2nd, 2004, 08:53 PM
Awesome characters and color scheme! The little green guy makes me grin.
EvilChristoph
January 2nd, 2004, 08:58 PM
i love the composition.


Now, Critiques:

The backpack has notable perspective issues. Also, the little green guy's foreshortened hand looks a little janky. The dinosaur's pectoral muscle(i think that's what is is) also looks a little janky. Lastly(and this is pure preference), i would choose a more dynamic color sceme.


good job tho.
Mr. Teatime
January 2nd, 2004, 09:51 PM
very nice peice, kinda gets a story going in your head, the backpack is the only thing i see wrong with it.
Hyptosis
January 3rd, 2004, 03:25 AM
hey, thanks for all the feedback guys, good advice! Helps me out!
Legato
January 3rd, 2004, 02:20 PM
other than what they said, the neck really bothers me... spines don't bend that way :P
Matt Elder
January 3rd, 2004, 02:58 PM
Very nice job that you have done here. Same comments as others (re spine and backpack). I also like how your fading things into the distance. Composition I think you are close but not quite there - I don't think that the flower is prominate enough either because it is a little on the small side or it just doesn't stand out enough from other elements in the image. Minor thing though.
Hyptosis
January 3rd, 2004, 06:39 PM
thanks for the advice guys =]
Loga4
January 4th, 2004, 06:10 PM
Cool work,Hyptosis!
Hyptosis
January 4th, 2004, 07:22 PM
heya, thanks dude =D
Barti89
January 5th, 2004, 05:48 AM
very nice pic. and also very nice of you showing how you did it .. itīll help .. at least me ... Im currently getting pissed on my photoshop ugly colored sketches :P .. May learn something from this :)
:fruit: :chainsaw:
Hyptosis
January 5th, 2004, 01:07 PM
thats why i do it, thanks you =D