Return of the needy one....(do critique)

[NOVAheaven]

here i am yet again, wanting to show you a bit of my half-assed progress. that I hope will receive some damn good criticism for

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http://i464.photobucket.com/albums/rr3/novaheaven/ARKRINGconceptsheet1.jpg
http://i464.photobucket.com/albums/rr3/novaheaven/Tekumsehconceptteaser.jpg
http://i464.photobucket.com/albums/rr3/novaheaven/tazinkuderkesthai.jpg
http://i464.photobucket.com/albums/rr3/novaheaven/zeminoruconceptsheet.png
http://i464.photobucket.com/albums/rr3/novaheaven/sonorushiconceptsketch001.jpg
http://i464.photobucket.com/albums/rr3/novaheaven/tazinkusketch004.jpg

i was wondering if anyone could lend me some useful tips for storyboarding for a graphic novel. my means seems like more work then it should be
http://i464.photobucket.com/albums/rr3/novaheaven/storyboardthumbnail002.jpg

http://i464.photobucket.com/albums/rr3/novaheaven/storyboardthumbnail001.jpg

[papervampire]

hey, really nice start here... looks like the anatomy might be a little off or lacking in structure sometimes... but I like the mood you've captured in a lot of these... looking forward to seeing some more!

[halfgeek]

I really like the linework on your first piece (the gun wielding man in a suit). Your Tazinku character looks great as well.

[NOVAheaven]

much thanks, and yea my anatomy is quite ify sometimes. main reason why im taking more of a study in it.

i mostly use saved reference photography, and virtual poser for my anatomy lately.
got any tips of what else i can use?