planetary invasion-the newborn unit

[acb]

"as the hive overlord instructed hes forces to invade planet x14 the breeders landed first on the far side of the planet ,dar away from the unsuspecting residents of this planet,to give birth to the warriors that will soon rip the skin out of the dominant race of this planet...as they did countless times befor."

well had this image in my mind from the first moment i read this contest's name and ill be trying to unfold it to you as ill progress with it...and for now ...

a picture with my pic's wip no.1 which to you will be really meaningless but soon itll all clear up :D (hopefully T_T)
havent decided on all of the details yet but ill do so along the way :D

wip 1 ver a
http://i42.tinypic.com/2rcrcr9.jpg

wip 1 ver b
http://i43.tinypic.com/2ef1a2x.jpg

there will be changes to everything its just the initial idea and hopefulll yull understand something that will let you crit about it from those two :sungod:

gl everyone and hf :yayca:

[acb]

well posting a half step here so yull might have a slight clue on the direction im going here :D
http://i39.tinypic.com/6jnlvo.jpg

im trying to emphasize how alien these things are by adding this well nothing like the aliens vegetation and showing those breeders where this creature came out of ^_^
well i wish i had more time to work on it today but thats what i have so far so ill continue working on it tommorow :D

[acb]

a small ,half step yet again,update ,cuz im trying to work on the zombies vs robots cghub minichallenge too and barely have something for it and there are 6 days to go T_T...

http://i39.tinypic.com/1tt3dj.jpg

concerning this work:
still working on the perspective ,trying to find inviromental things i could add like background mountains and stuff and vegetation and still working on the colour shceme i want cuz i want by those things to show how alien these invaders are and maybe ill add a primitive crit to show the primitive races in the place they landed at to show the contrast ^_^

i didnt have any time to work on it so imposting those half updates for crits purposes only ,thos didnt get any so far so just incase i didnt wrote it down...
C&C are WELCOMED ^_^ gl and hf ppl :lounge::rocker:

[Black Spot]

That sort of looks like a mother giving her baby its first bath.

[acb]

thx alot for your crit black spot ^_^ well its important for me to know whats the first impression this pic generates and i was wondering if thats the feel your getting from that state of the pic right now might have something to do with the lack of details to it and with further detailing it might generate another feel?

will be posting an update soon :D