new year demon design

[LEGION]

hi there people, this is a demon character design that I'm working on for a story I'm writing, that I will finished in a million years time
tell me what you think,

so far what I gather is wrong with it, is,
his abs aren't right, that would be because I don't really know how to sketch properly yet,
and the other thing is his eyes are far apart, but I put them like that to make it look more alien if ya get me, anyways, yea
http://www.renderosity.com/photos/ArtistArticle6525.jpg:bash:

[cryter]

I think it looks great.. nice and dark but I am a newbie..

[Chaser226]

Its very nice. I like the flow of it, how it focuses on the hand and fades back to his leg and other arm. Excellent textures showing its no human, oh and i love the dark mood with the rain. :clapping2 I do agree that you might want to work on your gesture. Catching the movement of the pose with simple lines will make it so much stronger.