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Romulus
January 1st, 2004, 10:29 PM
Heres 2 sketches of Eisen, one of my Modern Crusaders..If you think I should add anything to add detail or comments on this stance please comment about them..Remeber these are just really fast sketches I doodled and went over in marker. =D
Ack..sorry I need to repost the image.was way to big sorry..=/
here..
http://www.xbox-connection.com/hostedimages/Eisensketches0001.JPG
Romulus
January 1st, 2004, 10:51 PM
Heres one of my other characters. This one was just gunna be a drawing but I said eh wth and colored it..I am going to redraw this guy also..if you didnt notice his stance is off alot or a little, and his anatomy is off a tad also..
http://www.xbox-connection.com/hostedimages/Romulus10001.JPG
C&C welcome =D
SEVANS
January 8th, 2004, 02:42 PM
Not much too critique, since you said that they're are just sketches.
Just concentrate on general proportions (most of the image seems okay), the feet are enormous - even if he is wearing large boots.
The shoulders in the first one (shooting gun) are off, his collar blades have disappeared and you would be able to see his armpit on the gun hand.
One last suggestion that is less important, the teeth on the face mask are huge and appear almost rabbit like. this makes the mask look slightly cute to me.
Romulus
January 8th, 2004, 10:16 PM
Well im glad someone said something..I am in process of reworking those 2 and I finally got brainstorming for one of my other characters named Bombadier..il post some sketches of him later =D..and yes the torsi on the second one is way off. and I dont know why but I think the big boot thing is just my style =/
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