Fan Art... But "finished" nonetheless

[Michyu Girl]

It took me hours to do this. That's probably the longest I've ever worked on one piece!

http://home.earthlink.net/~michyugirl/sitebuildercontent/sitebuilderpictures/art01color.jpg

[Rayl]

Your colors are bold and you line work is very clean..Im not much of a manga fan but this is good..very stylized..Id like to see more:)

[Sonnenkind]

I'd suggest varying the line thickness a little, it adds to the picture and goes a lot easier on the eye.

Also, the sword feels like it should be a little more centered

[fungi]

kingdom hearts fan eh. got that game couple of days ago. anyway, i dont really see this as "one peice" youve got goofy and donald there floating around to the right. maybe you should have had them reflected in the sword or somthing. also the hand on the sword is a little messed up. a background would be cool also.