Dawn of a new Era : Jorns sketchbook (update 237.04-downunder)

[Jorn]

you guys inspire me alot and i really need more practice ,
so this will be the beginning of a new Era , the era of enhancement and improvement.
Amen.

>first daily sketches
concepts for a mod
http://users.pandora.be/jornk/jurassiclifeconcepts3012s.jpg

sketch for the thunderdome
http://users.pandora.be/jornk/dwarfsmaller.jpg

c&c is highly appreciated !

[-The Swift-]

my favourite is the second one, i think it's your strongest one. perhaps with the first one you could work on getting the lines more precise to make it look more building like. otherwise this is good work and good solid concepts. keep it up!:D

i just realised you registered on my B-day!!! nice one.(sorry, a bit random!)

[Jorn]

ok thanks for the advice , maybe i should try to color it , maybe i'll get a better "building-look" then.


i just realised you registered on my B-day!!! nice onethis means a never-ending friendship , lucky me !

anyway , thx for the comment , keep'em coming.

[spork891]

I agree with swift on the second drawing, it's definitely the strongest.

The first one could benefit from some modifications, give that room some attitude! Maybe recess the dino-tube things into the wall a little bit and throw a status panel in front of them, also my eyes are drawn to that screen in the center, consider moving it off to the side, or changing the entire perspective of the room! ;-)

Detailing on the floor and walls is a good start, keep it up!

[Jorn]

sketch 2-1-04

http://users.pandora.be/jornk/sketch2.jpg

[Jorn]

5-1-04
http://users.pandora.be/jornk/sketch3.jpg


c&c is appreciated !

[jarvis2824]

Hey Jorn,

That last one is definitely out there. You also seem pretty good at building designs. However, you definitely need to study perspective (the sun sets behind the horizon). Keep at it Jorn.

Sincerely,
Chris

[Jorn]

some newer stuff , longtime ago i posted ( computer downtime )

"Simple minds not always have simple souls ..."
http://users.pandora.be/jornk/foto28.jpg

Trying the palette knife out
http://users.pandora.be/jornk/manonmars.jpg

hawkprey-style
http://users.pandora.be/jornk/monster12.jpg

c&c appreciated!