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Rorshach
December 29th, 2003, 09:38 PM
http://www.polycount.com/cottages/rorshach/pimp/cythraul_scene04_edit2.jpg

Feedback appreciated.

r.

R_M
December 30th, 2003, 01:01 AM
good light!

2 minorthings though.

the head of the guy doesn't feel centered relative to his body. it might need some nudging to the right.

I like the surrounding BG, but it is a bit to busy. You have 4 different BGs: light cave, dark cave, rocks, and weird plants (in the righ corner). maybe you should simplify a bit.

hope it makes sense, good work :chug:

jca
December 30th, 2003, 01:45 AM
i dont really see what he's ^ talkin about, but i think this is really nice.. very good transition from light to dark, and i really like the highlights and shadows :)

Rorshach
January 1st, 2004, 01:41 PM
Thanks for the input. I think the background accomplishes what i wanted it to so i disagree about it being too busy. Previous versions I'd made did have this problem so i killed off a lot of the contrast and saturation until it was more subtle.

It was important to me to show him inbetween 2 types of world as I was working out how to approach making a Celt Druid.

I think you are right about his head though, I was trying to make it a little offbalance to emphasis the idea that he was tilting his head in recognition of the viewer but perhaps i went too far?

I'm happy the lighting proved popular.

r.