80's Xmen's Rogue pinup WIP

[morphine]

I plan to make a much larger version from this lo-res one.
The enlargement here's to show somethings I don't think are well viewable on the original size.

Comments, critiques, suggestions highly appreciated.

Original size:
older version linked (http://www.morphinemedia.com/temp/rogue_pose3.gif)
×2 head enlargement detail:
older linked (http://www.morphinemedia.com/temp/rogue_pose3_detail.jpg)
Small update, fixed her nose a bit:
older linked (http://www.morphinemedia.com/temp/rogue_pose3a_detail.jpg)

'nother upd:
http://www.morphinemedia.com/temp/rogue_pose3d.jpg

http://www.morphinemedia.com/temp/rogue_pose3d_detail.jpg

[LiL QoH]

You're having some proportion issues so I did a paint over, hope it helps :] the head is wayyy to big for the body

http://stu.aii.edu/~tld301/rogu.jpg

[morphine]

Hmmm.... yes, the head is a big problem right now.
(no pun intended. heh)

But... I can't see well the problem you pointed out, Qoh.
If I lower down the size of the head... maybe ... hmmm....
*thinks*

edit: oops. she doesn't have much room for her lungs!
Tkz, Lil Qoh!

[LiL QoH]

heres a side by side, you'll see the difference? The proportion of a womans torso... head to pelvis crest is 4 heads long

http://stu.aii.edu/~tld301/rogu2.jpg

[morphine]

OK, I think I fixed it now.

The updated image is at the top of the page.

Here are the proportion lines:
http://www.morphinemedia.com/temp/rogue_pose3d_proportions.jpg

edit: changed arm and hand length. Now it looks more like a woman's hand. :)

[LiL QoH]

Much better! :D

[morphine]

I saw the huge difference afterwards... heh
Thanks!