STROM CONCEPT

[STROMFISH]

designed for fun
hope you like it

[STROMFISH]

this is some models and some other pictures
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[STROMFISH]

maybe looks like a transformer
haha

[Dahami]

The last image with the aqua-colored lights reminds me of Tron. Interesting designs.

[James Kei]

Love it.

[Layil]

thats one mean looking car. i'd drive it...:) nice job!

[STROMFISH]

The last image with the aqua-colored lights reminds me of Tron. Interesting designs.

thankyou,but what is the TRON means,i dont know what it is

[STROMFISH]

any suggests???????

[STROMFISH]

hi,i build this car again,thanks for you all.your advices makes it much better.
here is a black and a red one

[STROMFISH]

god.....they are too big.....sorry for that....
comment and critique are welcome

[MarcSampson]

i like it better without the mesh, u should atleast try to bring 1 round form in it, and the wheels are little too small for such a huge vehicle.
but its very skillfull ofc. how exactly do u work?

[STROMFISH]

here are smaller ones.i`m so sorry for the big ones

[STROMFISH]

i like it better without the mesh, u should atleast try to bring 1 round form in it, and the wheels are little too small for such a huge vehicle.
but its very skillfull ofc. how exactly do u work?

thank you very much.i will upload some other angle later.without mesh?but i really like this mesh,hehe."how exactly do u work?",i uesd 3dsmax, mental ray and photoshop

[Rynox]

Love it.

[Jasper_]

It looks good man, but there's either something about the lighting or material on the car that makes it read a little funny. I like the clay renders a lot though, they really show off the design of the car.

[STROMFISH]

It looks good man, but there's either something about the lighting or material on the car that makes it read a little funny. I like the clay renders a lot though, they really show off the design of the car.

thank you，could you point out the weak point of the lighting and material?you critique will help me do it better

[FightingSeraph]

That is one badass car you have there; I'd like to see what other designs you can come up with.

[MrSmith]

very cool

[10thWay]

Very nice concept, thanks for sharing it.

[Darkside]

cool cars man, I love the planar approach to the overall design :)

[yoitisi]

thank you，could you point out the weak point of the lighting and material?you critique will help me do it better

Since you asked for it:

The problems with the lighting come from the design itself rather than the lighting or material. Your car is overly complex and has too many different angles and surfaces going on to give an easy read. You're trying to incorportate too many special features in one car, which usually only weakens each seperate detail rather than strengthening it.

I take it this car is partly inspired by the Lamborghini Reventon (http://images.europeancarweb.com/features/epcp_0709_12_z%2Blamborghini_reventon%2Bfront_left .jpg). Althoug it might look like a very edgy and sharp car, it isn't in actual fact a very complicated shape like yours. Notice how the side surface is actually very simple in comparison to your design, and how the side air intake is the one detail that attracts all the attention.

I think if you managed to make the surfaces a little less complex both the design and the lighting might become better.

Hope you don't mind my 2 cents :)

PS: small but practical detail on your car, but with the hood as high and large as it is it is rather impossible for the driver to actually see the road in front of him.

[sansan]

nice work!
很棒哥们！

[STROMFISH]

That is one badass car you have there; I'd like to see what other designs you can come up with.

badass?sorry i dont understand

[STROMFISH]

Since you asked for it:

The problems with the lighting come from the design itself rather than the lighting or material. Your car is overly complex and has too many different angles and surfaces going on to give an easy read. You're trying to incorportate too many special features in one car, which usually only weakens each seperate detail rather than strengthening it.

I take it this car is partly inspired by the Lamborghini Reventon (http://images.europeancarweb.com/features/epcp_0709_12_z%2Blamborghini_reventon%2Bfront_left .jpg). Althoug it might look like a very edgy and sharp car, it isn't in actual fact a very complicated shape like yours. Notice how the side surface is actually very simple in comparison to your design, and how the side air intake is the one detail that attracts all the attention.

I think if you managed to make the surfaces a little less complex both the design and the lighting might become better.

Hope you don't mind my 2 cents :)

PS: small but practical detail on your car, but with the hood as high and large as it is it is rather impossible for the driver to actually see the road in front of him.

you are so kind.thank you very very much.although i cant understand you exactly,but im still get much knowladge from your words,thank you

[STROMFISH]

nice work!
很棒哥们！

谢谢兄弟！

[tarc]

Wow, this is one awesome car, really!!!
Thanks for sharing

Marc