hello everybody

[borsalino]

Hi everybody, i discovered this forum today an i have to admit that i saw a lot of great artwork !
Thats why i regitrered here because i need your help!
i m a young french penciller (so excuse me for my bad english...) and i need advices for a comics i m planning to do.
so i show us what i can do with pencils and i m waiting for advices for my characters!
If you could help me to make them look better it would be great !
This comics is a vampiristic western called bishop
I m just working on the charachter design for the moment, i want to make the characters clean before beginning...
here are my artworks tell me what you think about it !
See U later boys an girls !
http://monsite.wanadoo.fr/krs_one/images/1-picture1.jpg?0.6384499043304096
http://monsite.wanadoo.fr/krs_one/images/1-picture2.jpg?0.9326883005777457
http://monsite.wanadoo.fr/krs_one/images/1-picture3.jpg?0.4751113247593476
http://monsite.wanadoo.fr/krs_one/images/6-picture1.gif?0.7624944845161407
http://monsite.wanadoo.fr/krs_one/images/0-picture.jpg?0.5322259006177747
http://monsite.wanadoo.fr/krs_one/images/2-picture2.gif?0.20947147110749198
http://monsite.wanadoo.fr/krs_one/images/5-picture1.jpg?0.1390296269190795

[Babee_fre5h]

:cool: dont be afraid to use more colors in ur colored drawings. the anatomy is pretty good except for the fingers in one of them.i think the guy is holdin a gun or somethin.yeah. i like the girl the best tho:D

[Samba's]

i love the anatomy! it looks sweeet! I find it hard to make the same character look like it is the same one, from other sides of view.

[borsalino]

thank you for all your advices!

Tust about color, I tried to put color on the snake cowgirl..
just tell me what u think about it...http://monsite.wanadoo.fr/krs_one/images/3-picture1.jpg?0.43116875547856914

[Voron]

I'm diggin your style. Well executed

[borsalino]

another colors for the girl because everybody told me "its too flashy!"
http://monsite.wanadoo.fr/krs_one/images/3-picture3.jpg?0.03599070930993531

[borsalino]

HI ! just beginning the pencils ! listenning for suggestions !

http://monsite.wanadoo.fr/krs_one/images/4-picture1.jpg

http://monsite.wanadoo.fr/krs_one/images/4-picture2.jpg

http://monsite.wanadoo.fr/krs_one/images/4-picture3.jpg