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bellas
December 26th, 2003, 08:40 AM
no final version... crits and comments before painting the last details, please ^n_n^ and merry X'mas :)
http://www.iespana.es/bellasart/dibujos/conejito.jpg

bwkeough
December 26th, 2003, 12:18 PM
you need more darks in the hair; even tho she's blonde, there will be dark shadows, especially with a light source behind her.

I think the hands are a little small, tho.

Good values on the face, but I think you need to add a little to the top of her head, just an inch or so.

Interesting concept, is she healing the rabbit or absorbing it's life?

usagi yojimbo
December 26th, 2003, 01:25 PM
woah, that lady freaks me out, i really like it though

are her hands supposed to be a different colour from her face? her right hand looks strange like its ona wierd angle

bellas
December 26th, 2003, 02:16 PM
she is healing the rabbit ^n_n^ I will work hard to improve those details, thanks for you crits them

5-0
December 26th, 2003, 04:23 PM
got the freaky part damn right,

her finger look like twiglets and the thumb joint is a bit wrong. I like the background to

good work

Carnifex
December 26th, 2003, 04:57 PM
nononononoNO!the head proportions are totally wrong!sorry if i sound rude,but that's a mutant head.
first off,her eyes are too high up.then her head is too small for the face(along with the hands),and i think noone's forehead goes that deep into the skull.the face itself is nicely rendered,but everything else isn't.you should rework it some more and keep a better eye on basic head anatomy.
sorry again if i sounded rude.

edit: to illustrate my points better,i reworked the pic a little bit.i didn't change the proportional size,but moved the eyes a bit and did some fixes on the forehead.if i'm wrong with what i said,just tell me and i'll remove the pic if you want.
http://www.photobucket.com/albums/1003/fisite/conejito-bellas-reworked.jpg

Erzengel
December 27th, 2003, 04:13 AM
meh, that doesnt look any better :\
her forehead's still a bit too small and her left index finger *shudders*
it gives me the feeling that shes partly alive, partly dead so she has to absorb the bunny's life energy