green lines

[gallon]

hi all!
I have another pic I'm working on besides the stormtrooper pic (same magazine though). I have to try and save some time so I do this monochrome and "noisy".
Some kind of tracking camera/sight. and the image is cropped for your Downloading pleasure :)

My biggest question is if the guys shpould have the green outline or not?
http://mywebpage.netscape.com/henrikgallon/run1web.jpg
http://mywebpage.netscape.com/henrikgallon/running2web.jpg

Any C&C appreciated

[Mercer]

i think the outlines helps bring out the feelings of a percise target systems b/c of the outlining of the bodies, without it it seems as if its just a crosshair moving around to target within the general field :D

mercer

[WildSpruceMoose]

Yeah I think, from a design and graphic point of view, that the green lines work better than none at all. Some may disagree but overall it unifies the piece and brings the characters out. Nice work and good luck ;)