new work

[foofoo]

seriously need crits on this one......

http://www.angelfire.com/alt/foofoo/images/greyfox.jpg

[shyst]

she needs a butt line near her crotch.... i think it throws the stance off?? but that would more realistically i think? i like the stance suits fineeee.... i also like the the jumper-

also mebby her top toros pushing at us a bit or her arm pits 2 low..... but i don't really know.... =)

nice -

[Voron]

I really like these sketches and just wanted to say that. I totally agree with shyst's crit by the way. Couldnt have said it better myself. Nice work.

[Babee_fre5h]

make her legs a lil fatter in the upper part near her so called ass.i think u should make it bigger^^ [says a girl] lol. anyway you males like bigger asses on us right:D :p .yeah. thats about it . other than that its perfect^^

[jca]

+ fix the hands

[foofoo]

shyst - hmmm... i see your point. most of the characters i did have this torso problem it seems. Thanks for pointing it out anyway. try my best to make it the next time.

voron - thanks;)

babee fresh - nothing better than having a female commenting on my female character....haha. as for bigger asses..... i dun know.. u mean making the hip wider? cause u can't see her ass from the front can't u?

jca - yup...and the hands...though i'm too lazy.....

[Main Loop]

yeah those hands are too small.. i dont think the butt needs to be bigger, more like the top of her thighs thicker.. thats more of an aesthetic consideration.. cuz technically they are right...

[foofoo]

did a new one......... pls pls pls tell me how u guys feel about this piece...........

http://www.angelfire.com/alt/foofoo/images/trooper.jpg

[neobooboo]

hey. posted your new work. you should thank me.....
by the way......cool 'trooper'