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shadyj129
December 24th, 2003, 02:12 AM
So I did a drawing for someone as a background to a poem. They're giving it to a sibling for Christmas. I did it rather quick and the only main issue I see is with her right foot/ankle. Opinions?

http://www.arleah.com/IntheDark.jpg
-The Swift-
December 24th, 2003, 11:47 AM
it looks a bit twisted, i think it should be on the ground like the otherone. otherwise good work and nice poetry!:D
Yaseck
December 24th, 2003, 04:52 PM
It looks like her right leg is broken...
shadyj129
December 24th, 2003, 10:18 PM
Originally posted by Yaseck
It looks like her right leg is broken...

Hehe, didn't I mention the leg when I posted? heh