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arkain
December 23rd, 2003, 04:02 PM
Hi , this is my first post on this forum and i would like to know what you guys think about this drawing i made.
it's a elf warrior

http://www.hopscotch.fathamburger.com/elfink.gif

The Quality isnt as is best , because my scanner is broken and my digital cameras doesnt make the paper white enough hehehe :)

i hope you enjoy , and i would like to say that you guys kick serious ass in drawing sketch and etc

my english isnt very good because i am french , sorry :(

meesta spawkoro
December 23rd, 2003, 10:48 PM
take some life drawing classes, or just draw from a life a lot. and get some anatomy books, because that's what needs the most work. anatomy and proportions.

it looks as if you drew each part of the character by itself. block in the overall shape first so you can get the proportions right, then go in and add detail.

Al Ian
December 24th, 2003, 12:03 AM
A lesson I learned the hard way. Anatomy before Style.

Wizard
December 24th, 2003, 02:17 AM
Arkain learn the anatomy of a human. The pose is good, but left leg bothers me, it makes right leg look short on that pic. Yeah, elf's anatomy is way off, but if your body looks like that then I have no crits.

Forge
December 24th, 2003, 02:20 AM
yeah others are right... you're anatomy is... euh.. but i really like you're avatar ;) draw draw draw no better advice

Samba's
December 24th, 2003, 04:17 AM
I think when you erase the left leg, it looks much better, because it is a side view, it will look like the left leg is behind the right leg. The keft leg is to short, just like Wizard said.

(It is a very nice drawing, but critism helps you a lot more than saying oohhh! and aaaah!!):)

-The Swift-
December 24th, 2003, 12:29 PM
looking very musclular!