woman in helmet

[talmir]

This is just what it says :)

http://www5.domaindlx.com/talmir/Sketches/woman3.jpg

I have it also in my daily sketchbook

[Voron]

Seems like people prefer not to respond. Oh well...

I consider you an acquantance so, here I go.

I would add a little more definition to the face to make it more beleivable.
Love the eyes. Right one needs to be lower. Shadow of the helmet needs to be on the head. Contrast separating the value of the helmet and head. More attention to the hair. Protrude the nose, its too short.

Eyes gives her a neo-egytian appeal :)
Like the concept.
Like the stripe and writing on her forehead. It creates a plot.
Good sketch :D