One Little Tormented Angel...=(

[SABRE]

WELL, MY FIRST POST ON SKETCH...


http://img6.photobucket.com/albums/v19/SABRE/angel_miss.jpg


A SKETCH FOR A POEM OF A LITTLE FRIEND!!





OU REVOIR...........................

[Voron]

Hey Sabre

First of all WELCOME!

Good post. Excellent composition. The wings are immaculate ant the backgroung and font that you chose feel appropiate. One thing though, the Human element needs to be more mysterious. The pose does that but there are inaccurate details about he figure that throw it off. Primarily the hair the entire right arm and the left leg.
The hair quite frankly looks too black and thick and the limbs need definition. I suggest giving the body an inner glow or a blur to call attention from its details and softening the hair with a lighter shade.
Sorry If I seem harsh, I just really love the peice and I want to see you improve upon it if you'r interested.
Good work

[SABRE]

OK THANX!! IT WILL TRY TO DO THAT!!

ALWAYS IS GOOD SOME OF HELP!! DONT WORRY!!



PD: SORRY FOR MY BAD ENGLISH!! X(




CHAUU.........................