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View Full Version : Teen Challenge 63: Garden of Impurity [VOTING]

Dave_
May 2nd, 2009, 07:02 PM
Bad turnout ppl, only 2 finished enteries.


Jerik
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/7595/gardenofimpurity.jpg


Pixie Trick
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/7889/gardenofimpurity1x.jpg
Keng
May 14th, 2009, 04:12 PM
It's too quiet in here!

Jerik: Nice concpet. I really like the colours and it's nice clean rendering. I'd like to see more texturing and variation in the ground. Right now it makes the whole picture take on a toony look. Also, careful, you have a few see-through trees up front.

Pixie Trick: I love your twisting tree. It's got a lot of personality. What I got lost on was the .. gargoyle(?) in the center. It's a dark picture and with it being set in night and all you really have to push for a strong silhouette I find his shape and such gets confusing especially closer to the pedestal he's sitting on.
Keng
May 14th, 2009, 04:12 PM
It's too quiet in here!

Jerik: Nice concpet. I really like the colours and it's nice clean rendering. I'd like to see more texturing and variation in the ground. Right now it makes the whole picture take on a toony look. Also, careful, you have a few see-through trees up front.

Pixie Trick: I love your twisting tree. It's got a lot of personality. What I got lost on was the .. gargoyle(?) in the center. It's a dark picture and with it being set in night and all you really have to push for a strong silhouette I find his shape and such gets confusing especially closer to the pedestal he's sitting on.