sheet and skin

[H.O.L.M]

http://www.gatherz.org/sfeeling/2003_1_3/lonely.jpg

my skin is hungry.

[Voron]

The most interesting thing about this Sketch to me is font below the bed. I would be nice if you translated it. As for the sketch, it needs work. Pay attention to each line you draw. Treat each one as though it were a complete sketch in itself. Be patient and keep drawing and experiment so that you can refine your style.
Over and Out

[H.O.L.M]

well, i try to translate it.

my skin is hungry; we; the delusion world and the lonely heart; tender person; rub our sheet in order to get kindly petting.

[talmir]

Talmir doesnt understand.. Talmir look at picture and see man but no read text. Talmir think slow so talmir read translation... Talmir still doesnt understand... ooga booga


No, really tho..
Odd poem. I dont get it. The picture seems simple and relatively clean.. I'd say keep posting and practice.. And as he said above.. treat every line as if its a sketch in itself, espessially with this style.

[AnarchyAo2]

I"m probably wrong but I think it means the world acts like it cares about you but it really doesn't.