Perium

[Hyptosis]

This is a comic I've been tossing around for a while. I'm only three pages into it, but go ahead and tell me what you think. for the most part, it seems like people don't like it. tell me why. I've spent a lot of time on it. Thanks again guys. =]
http://www.lorestrome.com/trash/perium000.jpg
http://www.lorestrome.com/trash/perium001.jpg
http://www.lorestrome.com/trash/perium002.jpg
http://www.lorestrome.com/trash/perium003.jpg

[enigma]

seems interesting so far, u have some nice backgrounds going for u there

[Hyptosis]

Thank you.

[gallon]

I have a suggestion... you use outlines on the characters, not on the background. Drop the outlines and you'll get a much more uniform feel. Right now the people looks pasted into the scenery.
Try it, I think it'll do wonders on the pages :)

[Hyptosis]

Thanks, I will do. =]