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Voron
December 20th, 2003, 04:02 AM
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These are some of the things that I did in the past. There are many. Please critique what you can. Let me have it! Don't hold back. :bash:

Constructive critism can only make me better. THANKS!

http://www.angelfire.com/rebellion2/voron/Tino_S1.jpg

http://www.angelfire.com/rebellion2/voron/Tino_S2.jpg

http://www.angelfire.com/rebellion2/voron/Tino_S3.jpg

http://www.angelfire.com/rebellion2/voron/Tino_S4.jpg

http://www.angelfire.com/rebellion2/voron/Tino_S5.jpg

http://www.angelfire.com/rebellion2/voron/Tino_S6.jpg

http://www.angelfire.com/rebellion2/voron/Tino_S7.jpg

http://www.angelfire.com/rebellion2/voron/Tino_S8.jpg

http://www.angelfire.com/rebellion2/voron/Tino_S9.jpg

Please give me feedback on my First Website


www.angelfire.com/rebellion2/voron/ (http://www.angelfire.com/rebellion2/voron/)
phantom_head
December 20th, 2003, 05:40 AM
like them all but i LOVE the hair on the third one!

as for the web site, i have to admit that it's pretty bland at the moment. even if you intend to leave it as a gallery, it would be nice if you create different sections - one for mech, one for characters, one for paintings...you get the idea. add some color. the gray background blends quite well with the white background of your lineart, and the pictures get lost. hope this helps a little!
young paddy1
December 20th, 2003, 12:15 PM
Love it al especially the grafitti style works, just one thing about the mec, it looks a little camp or possibly unbalanced.
Voron
December 21st, 2003, 06:29 PM
young paddy1
Thanks man,

The thing does look unbalanced. I have no clue how to fix it though..
talmir
December 21st, 2003, 06:39 PM
Great work. I love your life studies, especially the bald woman and the hair in the third :) Keep it up.. The only thing I notice (might just be your style) is that the faces have a bit of a cavemanish look to them, you could try having them a bit straighter... But they do look good as they are so you might want to keep that anyways :)

Keep up the good work
Voron
December 22nd, 2003, 02:56 AM
Thanks talmir

Caveman Hugh. Weird but I see it. Maybe if I change the cheekbones, cheek and chin it might make a difference. I'm open to any other suggestions. Thanks for the tip

http://www.angelfire.com/rebellion2/voron/Tino_S9.jpg http://www.angelfire.com/rebellion2/voron/Tino_S9a.jpg