witchblade

[Grendel]

This is a mock up of a darker witchblade idea I did for someone.

http://igrendel.com/images/colors/witchblade.jpg

[PencilPunx]

You have a very unique "scribbly" style to your finished works that you obviously spend a lot of time working on. It works for you, and I like it, so it's hard to comment on your tecnique, though I will say the corpse's right hand looks like it has a few too many fingers. Aside from that small issue, I have one very minor, very basic point to critique:

I don't know if this is part of a narrative or just one single image, but the dialog captions don't read easily as they are currently laid out. The natural way of reading this is left to right, so one would read Sarah's speech before the crouching dudes. If it's a stand alone piece you could easily flip the image and add the text again, if it's part of a sequence the layout could throw off whatever conversational flow you had going.

Sorry I'm so long winded about such a simple issue. I must add, I really like seeing your different interpretations of various comic characters. You always do interesting things.

[Grendel]

yea- plus I left the "you" out of his question..Thiss is nothing important just a mokc up idea for a writer .

[Aven]

I love your sketchy style of art, but unfortunately it is a little bit difficult for this piece. It is very difficult to see that Sarah is indead wielding the Witchblade. Other than that it is well done.

[Grendel]

yea some things could be cleared up proabably with some ink..thanks .