Sketchbook AKA the horrific beggining

[GirlFlash]

I hear you guys are good at tearing a piece apart and I think I could do with that, I fall in love with my stuff before its done and I think I need my heart broken :^^:

anyway heck knows theres lots of awesome artists here so I figure I'll work hard and someday kick all your asses my mad skillz, with that in mind, would you help me suck a little less?

[J.roxanne]

good works~~

I think you need do more Color practice~

keep up~!

[GirlFlash]

todays sketch, I should probably do more drawings and spend less time on them, or maybe the reverse, I dont know...

anyway this took about two hoursish I think.

[GirlFlash]

heres todays scribble, the first attempt at a character I've had in my head for a while I want to use for a game.

I know the folds in her scarf are all totally the wrong angle but nothing else is leaping out at me as wrong, I'm sure there is something though I just cant see what yet :S