punkette

[Carlo_Julian]

Hi guys. I believe this is my first post in the "It's finally finished" section. I can see now that there are some problems with it, like her legs and left arm, but over all I'm happy with it.

Please feel free to critique the pic. I'm really trying to improve.

By the way, it's colored with conte and pencil crayon on manilla.

http://individual.utoronto.ca/carlo_julian/2003_12_16_goth_mari.jpg

This is actually part of a christmas present for one of my friends. I hope she likes it!

[Random Chaos]

its pretty nice, except for her left arm and right arm are very noticeably different lengths, and something isnt right about the angle of her face. are those holes in her legs?

[battlemonkey]

the holes in her stockings? i think they are, are very distracting. i keep thinking theyre leaches, or something of the sort. her thumb holding the case is off. fix those 2 things and it'll be A-Ok!
:D

[Carlo_Julian]

THanks for the crits guys.

Yah, I noticed the difference in arm length too. Her left arm was supposed to be foreshortened, but then when I got to drawing the hand I forgot what position I was imagining the arm in... so I drew it as if it the arm wasn't foreshortened.

Yes, those are supposed to be holes in her stockings but judging from your reactions, I didn't communicate that too well.

This piece is as good as it's gonna get now... I can't go back since it's in ink. But I appreciate the comments and try and correct such things in the future.

Thanks again.

[Carlo_Julian]

Here's another pic I did as part of my Christmas present for my friend.

http://individual.utoronto.ca/carlo_julian/2003_12_18_dress.jpg