Dezzart

[Steam Monster]

Finally made one! Any type of critique is appreciated.

Hello CA! My name is Dez, I'm 17, heavily addicted to tacos, and hoping to go to an art school soon!

[a la bapsi]

yaay you finally upped and posted :D
i expect more stuff from you soon, POST!

[Gonk]

I like your paint.

[Steam Monster]

Life drawing practiiiice. Proportion is off lol.

http://i41.tinypic.com/25jhb3l.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/2rxwvpf.png
http://i42.tinypic.com/2nuk6c1.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/309j9yg.png

[Steam Monster]

Small update, nothing big. It's kinda old.

http://i39.tinypic.com/6roltv.png

[Steam Monster]

Animatioooon!

http://i42.tinypic.com/2aev2up.jpg

[DKHutcheson]

That taco makes me laugh. He's got that look on his face saying he's going somewhere. ♥

Can't wait to see you post more, this stuff looks pretty great. Love the melted ice-cream thing.

[Abrodos]

Great work here! The studies are good, also the other work. On the studies, you could push the lights a bit further, making the reflections stronger. Anyway, keep up the work! it would be nice to see more from you.

[Masayasu]

Pretty cool stuff in here. Look forward to seeing more.

[DeeStar]

I'm loving your last update, the paper texture is really nice. Looking forward to seeing more

[JJacks]

This is a great start to a book. The studies are very nice. You just might need to up the contrast a little bit and pay closer attention to the distance between the jaw and the nipples.

The running taco is love. <3

[DaStreets]

Great colorful work. Keep posting more. Comment back if you want, thanks.

[Adela Daniels]

KIBA! I did not know you were on here D: and I did not know you did realism either.

Either way it looks good and your line work as always looks good to me my dear friend.

[Steam Monster]

Thank you guys! And thanks for the crits!

I almost forgot I had a Sketchbook! I was also gone for a while, which gave me time to doodle a ton of stuff. Unfortunately, my scanners dead. Nooo! So here's a small update. I don't really color images like this, but I gave it a try.

http://i33.tinypic.com/m96621.png

[Huey Yeng]

Maybe if you put a more simpler background it will make your character more stand out. Checkerbox pattern can be tricky to implement as background. ;P

Otherwise I like your character from post #5. Keep it up with the practice. :)

[Steam Monster]

Thanks for advice, I changed it. c:

[Steam Monster]

Doodle
http://i34.tinypic.com/24d55kn.png

[Alew]

The taco is cute.
I love the dynamic on your last drawing.
Good work!

[Steam Monster]

Oops, forgot to post, Merry Late Christmas!

http://i47.tinypic.com/9jkacx.png

[Steam Monster]

A few things I've done recently.

http://i48.tinypic.com/1y2t1x.png
Still a WIP!
http://i49.tinypic.com/2zpmgkn.png

[Steam Monster]

http://i45.tinypic.com/zurv9z.pnghttp://i48.tinypic.com/6rscav.png


Commission and a trade. Meh, I wish there were figure drawing classes around here.

[FightingSeraph]

I like what you have here, Steam. However, I would like for you to do stuff that you haven't done before.

[JJacks]

Your cell shading is very nice and clean. That bright back-lighting looks pretty and I see a lot of artists that do it, but sometimes it can work against you and flatten your figures. In your case the dragon creature's arms, leg, and tails look less rounded with that sharp color on the edge. A gradual value change in those areas will help round things out. Also, generally reflected light that is brighter than the lit planes on a figure are a bit visually confusing.

[Steam Monster]

@FightingSeraph - Thanks! And can do!

@JJacks - Thank you for the advice! I knew it looked kinda flat but I wasn't sure how to fix it.

[mike butkus]

Your off to a good start and you have some very competent sketches, i would like to see you take one of your digital paintings taken to a finish, good work.

[G_U_T_S]

The 5th pic you posted is amazing, wow, what color. Just really great, it's got a anime color feel to it, reminds me a little of Tekkonkinkreet. Hope to see more from you, take care.

[Steam Monster]

@Mike - Thank you! I can't finish most of my paintings because I get all discouraged about how it looks. lol But I trrryyyy!

@Guts - Thanks! :D


SOME LITTLE GIFS I'm just getting worse and worse at these things haha
http://i42.tinypic.com/2qjko5x.gifhttp://i42.tinypic.com/30rv72b.gifhttp://i41.tinypic.com/2zr27g5.gifhttp://i44.tinypic.com/34sfipi.gifhttp://i40.tinypic.com/34hdyww.gifhttp://i41.tinypic.com/14kgv9s.gif

YUM FURRIES

[phantasy]

you have a cool style and good sense of humor. love those gifs, keep it up!

[Steam Monster]

Eye study fail. I haven't done a study for a while. :c
http://i42.tinypic.com/351aip5.png

[Steam Monster]

Drawing from life is haaaard. I have a terrible eye for color.

http://i39.tinypic.com/9tcxnb.png

[Steam Monster]

Aw man, how horrible is this plate. lololol
http://i41.tinypic.com/1zb528m.png