Jumper (figure drawing)

[Lohan]

Hey I just worked out this sketch. Didn't finalize anything, do background, etc etc etc. Please some direction on anything to fix from here before I finalize the lines and add background and everything? Any help appreciated, thanks :)
I'm sorry but my host doesn't allow me to deep link images I just found out. It will load quickly. Sorry

http://free.hostdepartment.com/t/thomgarbarini/JumperWIP.jpg

PLEASE try pasting it into a fresh IE. I'm sorry for all the trouble. :O

[nikia]

There is an error on your site. Freehost said access denied when I went to look at your pic.

[Lohan]

Does it work for anyone? It should work.

[nuffinc]

Works for me OK.

Nice sketch. Not a present for a girlfriend I hope! It would be easier just to tell her.

Is mise