3 Eye Demon-wip

[DA-AmonRA]

HI

this is my firt time to post here (but i have lingered around here for nearly a year).

OK here is a drawing that im currently working on.
http://pcmunkey.net/h1/DA-Boredom005.jpg

constructive criticism will be greatly appreciated.

[nikia]

Wow, very good! I like it! Maybe a bit narrow on the torso and hips. But of course that could just be your design. Or you haven't finished that area yet. Are you going to do the hands?

[DA-AmonRA]

Originally posted by nikia
Wow, very good! I like it! Maybe a bit narrow on the torso and hips. But of course that could just be your design. Or you haven't finished that area yet.

its one of those errors that i usually make :mumble:

Originally posted by nikia Are you going to do the hands?

yes...hopefully i will not f*** them up like i usually do.

and thanx for the criticism..

[DA-AmonRA]

:machinegu :fruit:

[EDIT:]Image Removed

[EDIT:] there u go ...the old pic

http://img9.photobucket.com/albums/v27/DA-AmonRA/DA-Boredom0077.jpg

[Method]

Nice job. My only crit would be that the far right arm sticks out to much, mainly his shoulder. At that perspective it would be behind the body more. Another thing you may want to consider is incorperating a light source to help punch out your art more. Good luck and keep it up. :)

-D

[EVIL]

Nice! but i suggest that you complete the basic shading before you even start on the details. the anatomy on his lower (viewers view) left arm is off. I suggest looking it up on some anatomy books.

The style looks good and he looks pretty evil to me so you have completed another goal in that part. But the mechanical blade that sticks out of his lower arm doesnt fit the picture.

edit: maby this helps a bit:

http://www.remtek.net/0/EVIL/default/images/01/132.jpg

[DA-AmonRA]

thanx for the crits...:thumbsup:i think i'll be remaking him again.

because there are so many things that are starting to shait me about him...

horns look weard and not how i wanted them to be.

his anatomy

face to cartoony...so on. :bash: :D

[Al Ian]

AHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Nekkie demon man (covers eyes)

This is gonna rock when its done!!

[DA-AmonRA]

how does he look now :D

anything that needs correcting

just started today

http://img9.photobucket.com/albums/v27/DA-AmonRA/DA-AmonRA-DEMON01.jpg

[JJ.Done]

good job bro. awesome shading can i ask you a question. your gonna laugh but how do you add a pic onto your thread. please help me ...please

[Hanuka]

amazing shading :O

i think his neck is too thick, though and his head is a bit too far on the left.

[Matt Elder]

The shading is amazing! It would have been interesting to still have the first image up so we can see how you've progressed with the piece. The neck is off a little along with the bottom of the lateral obliques connecting into the pelvis area. Is this for anything in particular or just practice?