Making a cartel...

[Roaming Dragon]

This is my first post in this comunity, hello to everybody.
This scketch is for a cartel. I have working in it, three days and I think its the time to view if it's a good base to the colour or not. Please, said me your oppinion and how I can make it better. Thanks. :D

http://perso.wanadoo.es/janna/dreamC.jpg

Her right hand have an error, but I cannot repair it. I don't know why :(

[nikia]

Looks nice. The problem hand is too thin. You have the rest of the body fairly fleshed out, but her hand and arm (her right one) are thin like cardboard. Fatten them up and her left one also. Hope this helps. Someone else that is in too this type of art might be able to help you more.:)

[pvrhye]

Your proportions are a bit off, but I like your lineweight.

[Roaming Dragon]

Thank you very much. I've drawed two possible compositions. What is the best?
http://perso.wanadoo.es/janna/dreamA.jpg
http://perso.wanadoo.es/janna/dreamB.jpg
http://perso.wanadoo.es/janna/dreamC.jpg

I need your oppinion :(

[pvrhye]

I'd say the second unless she's intimately familiar with her sword:D