Aftermath

[Legato]

although this isn't completely completed, i doubt ill repost it, as all i have to do is add a few details. please add in comments, even minor ones, kuz i can still change the little stuff... also, i didn't have a smudger when doing this, so all shading looks pretty rough.

http://incolor.inetnebr.com/legato/Art%20Scans/Aftermath.jpg

[AFoote]

I would lengthen the gun a bit so it overlaps the hood of the car that is behind it. As it stands now the two kind of meet at their edges and the background seems to blend with the main figure.

And just to clarify: the live wire is your source of light? If so, perhaps some more dynamic, darker shadows? If you have an ambience or alternate source of light in the background, however, then ignore this.

[Legato]

i was shooting for the live wire adding accent shadows, but not being the sole source of light. shadows are a bitch tho. i plan on darkening allot (i didn't do it at school, because all i had was a mechanical pencil) as for teh gun and hood, yeah, that was bothering me, and i might change it. thanks!