Website Critique

[jetpack42]

I wasn't sure which forum this goes in, but I'd like some constructive criticism on a website I made for myself, which was required for my graduation (Thurs.) from the Art Institute of Seattle. Also, I'm new here, so you can check out some of my work.
I won't be able to make any changes or updates until mid-january, but I would really appreciate any good ideas or any immediate fixes to crucial problems. Thanks

[jetpack42]

I failed to put the website address...

http://www.mlentz.com

or you could click on my www button.
Thanks

[chudzta]

Hey pal. Didnt get a chance to check the artwork out. But i may later.

As far as the site goes its cozy. relaxing and easy to get around(atleast on my browser). So u get instant props for that. As far as things id change. The first page. the home page seems kinda flat and infoless. Unless you have future plans for a running journal or something of the like in this spot. Then i would summon up your bio section in a nice sweet informative paragraph with an extra link to the resume page or ur email. Some quantity of text at first. a small quantity will give the viewer somethign to grab hold of right away rather than go for another click. Atleast.. in my opinion.. it would keep me there longer. Again nice stuff. hope all is well in the next month and i look forward to seeing ur stuff in january. piece - chudds

[jetpack42]

Thanks for the advice..good things to keep in mind.

I notice you are from Williamsburg VA...my family's personal vacation hell...we took a trip there 4 consecutive years way back, some of the worst times of my life. Theres no vacation like being marched through Yorktown in 100+ degree weather. ugh.