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bellas
December 15th, 2003, 08:27 AM
this it is a kiss for you, sent from painter7 ^n_n^
http://www.iespana.es/bellasart/dibujos/kissforyou.jpg
Rusty Red Robot
December 15th, 2003, 05:28 PM
Nice pic! Her torso seems a bit long, though.
Shadowkiller
December 15th, 2003, 06:34 PM
her right arm is really long, maybe you could make her holding the bottle of bubbles
Emptypants
December 16th, 2003, 04:22 AM
Nice job!!! Great color work.

I agree with both Rusty Red Robot and Shadowkiller, but nothing bothers me more than her jaw. Have her hair cover it up more or something. Because of how the shadow on her jaw is set up, it gives the illusion of her left side of the jaw pop out, where the other side moves in. And because that side of her jaw is popped out so much, it makes me think her neck is super strained on the left side from that position, making it an unnatural pose.


- :dork: